What is this action ye take on bended knee?
To show thy love intended for another...or me?
Doest thou play with my feelings or finally are they real?
Doest thy care how often my heart has had to heal?
How can I believe thee now...knowing of your past?
Sweet things ye spoke to others, only moments to last!
I care for thee in more ways than thou doest understand...
For within that soul before me lies a remarkable man.
A man who doth search for love and to be truly understood,
but recognizes not one who would do so, ...and could...
Ye sought women who would please thy sense of manly needs,
yet overlooked less beautiful or useful as if they were but weeds.
As ye are aging now with fewer years to waste,
ye seek out what ye threw away and gather it in haste!
I long to be the one ye desire and see it in thine eyes,
but can not risk being found I am only in disquise.
A friend of thine ye say I am and most dearly that is true.
If only ye understood what most I want...oh only if thy knew!
I wish ye well in all ye may do, but most of all 'tis this that I do pray,
A time would come in which ye knew, with me was blessed to stay.
Frantastic Fantasies April 6, 2009
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misschoos
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Apr 6 @ 5:01PM
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ragtopcookie
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Apr 6 @ 5:08PM
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Ive got a question ive always wanted to ask the ladies....and since this is a womans blog.....does it matter to anybody out there if a man proposes on bended knee.......or does it matter more in how he does it......dont mean to take over your blog in anyway.....just always wondered and looking for insight.......cookie
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HUGS4UANDME
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Apr 6 @ 5:51PM
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  beautiful 
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ttomtarr
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Apr 6 @ 6:33PM
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Beautiful words and thoughts.
But even when a snake says beautiful words, he is still a snake.
~*~
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CrackerJackPat
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Apr 6 @ 7:31PM
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And may I add.....  Absolutely great!
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sybnann
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Apr 6 @ 8:41PM
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I love it Fran!! Very beautiful,poetic and romantic! Great job!!
And to you Cookie--- I think it is "how" the man asks that is most important, at least it would be in my opinion.
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summerbreeze916
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Apr 8 @ 10:35AM
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Beautiful, Fran. Perhaps he's become shy in his older age.
Cookie......I agree with Syb. At our age, many knees are shot. It doesn't matter if he gets down on bended knee at all. What's important......is the way he 'asks'........with sincerity and love.
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