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posted 4/23/2009 10:42:00 AM |
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  fightingirish04

As the light of "Hopeless" fades
into the glow of "Complicated"
walking circles around charades
now pretending I'm too jaded,
your starlight sets me free
and settles warm on me.

In sleepless dreams, I see you there
a perfect beacon on the shore
how am I, alone, aware
that the man you're shining for
can hold you in his arms this night
but he doesn't really see your light?

In your atmosphere, I lose my way
wishful wanting, though I ache.
What are the things I need to say
to make these dreams awake?
What would show these feelings true?
Can you see I have light, too?

Rising lonely in my night
love's true beauty to define
trapped between the wrong and right,
but you cannot be mine.
False love calls your name
his hand puts out your flame.

I trace your path across the sky
and worship from afar.
Your light, I pray will never die
the perfection of your star.
Faith and hope and beauty too
see how they shine for you..

Kyle Kelly
April 23, 2009

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Comments:
pamdemonium

Apr 23 @ 11:23AM  
That was absolutely beautiful.
sybnann

Apr 23 @ 5:18PM  
Well this is very sweet and romantic. Thanks for sharing!
jentoblues101

Apr 23 @ 9:14PM  
Wow, this is not the callous, sarcastic man I've read in the past.

What happened?
luvshorses644

Apr 24 @ 8:22AM  
I think the consensus of feelings here is what I FELT when I read this..

Sweet Gawd, this is an aching love sonnet.. it is beautifully written and I feel the pangs of love that is not freely returned... bittersweet when one falls for someone that cannot or will not be able to return that love.

I wish you luck and hope for the outcome you seek.

This was a beautiful poem. ~*~
misschoos

Apr 24 @ 4:16PM  
Bionic_Angel

Apr 28 @ 3:24AM  
Still wanting what you can't have I see.

Beautiful words Kyle. Hope life's treating you good.
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