Already a member? Click here to sign in!

You ..... Us

posted 10/17/2009 12:34:06 AM |

5 kudos

what's this?

report abuse

tagged: prose, poem

texasblues

( troll prose I suppose)

You taught me the real meaning of love
a wingless angel sent to me from above
to me you are a shining guiding light
you make everything wrong alright
and if I stall you give me a shove

I said I love you but that's to small
it just doesn't begin to said it all
I can tell you your the one I adore
but there is that and so much more
at your feet I would gladly crawl

more than just a matter of lust
it's in you I can put all my trust
no worrying about being betrayed
there's no reason ever to be afraid
there's no you and no me it's just

Us ... till the end ... us

Copy & paste to friend: (Click inside box; Ctrl + C to copy; Ctrl + V to paste)

read more blogs!

Blogs by texasblues:

Tonight is Your's

Today

Reason to leave

Own Song

Gone

You ..... Us

Love

Vines

The great debate

Ogden Ave.

Comments:

post a comment!

travelwoman	Oct 17 @ 1:29AM
	Nice dream.... I used to think things like that. And then.... reality hit.... But it's such a lovely poem. .

texasblues	Oct 17 @ 1:32AM
	Can't give up dreaming, that would be admitting defeat

LJRite	Oct 17 @ 4:24AM
	ther e's no reason ever to be afraid

ragtopcookie	Oct 17 @ 6:46AM
	I think it goes behond just giving up......for me......its more like not caring anymore......ive looked for years for the right woman.....and ive been fooled a few times as if ive found her.....only to be shown.....that she wasnt as she seemed.....and im not blamming this all on the women that have came and gone in my life.....for me......its more like......do i really need a woman in my life to make me happy.......and i get the same answer to that question time and time again.....while it would be nice to find somebody........im doing ok all alone......i look around me and see alot of unhappy couples.........and i think to myself that ive been there before......its taken me years to learn what i want....and im sure what i dont want.......so if she never comes my way......im ok with it as well.....i can go on alone........been doing it for years........cookie

leprichaun_magic	Oct 17 @ 6:59AM
	..so Romantic ..yet ..Succinct....lovely

dizzydoll	Oct 17 @ 7:21AM
	perfect.... and every time you write new prose, i think it cant get better. and then it does. just perfect

CHARLIgurl1	Oct 17 @ 7:54AM
	Simply.. beautiful.

rockerchick1968	Oct 17 @ 9:38AM
	Very nice

butterfly943	Oct 22 @ 10:50PM
	I love it

post a comment!

| | | | | | | | |