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posted 12/15/2007 2:50:55 AM |
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Leaven

Take a breathy look at the world
The best laid plans of a boy and a girl
When things demand both a truth and a dare
A day in heaven, and heaven knows where

The rumors echo and the proof runs astray
In every life there's both a night and a day
Where candles burn, windows shine back at us
Reflection glimmers both esteem and disgust

Conviction changes when change is abound
The bitter sweet confusion humble and proud
Snuff the candle but the mirror remains
Though all is shadow till the sun comes again

In every hand is a cup for the world
The best laid plans of a boy and a girl
Every time is both the future and past
As every moment was the first and the last

The wild passion as the heart runs astray
In every life there's both a night and a day
At dawn we wonder, we remember at dusk
Obliged to love and hope and give and mistrust

Through all our days the alterations abound
The bitter sweet confusion humble and proud
The truth will come and go but lies never fade
Lover, you will live the love that you made

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Comments:
Philosopher8659

Dec 15 @ 6:56AM  
I only see two lines that need work,

Awesome, very nice.
Philosopher8659

Dec 15 @ 6:58AM  
Oh, and no, I am not a poetry critic, I hate poetry, they were cadence breaks.
misschoos

Dec 15 @ 8:12AM  
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