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posted 12/20/2007 2:11:06 PM |
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  redtigr

Thirst and satiation...

The pool may remain, but its molecules are ever changing, traversing the earth as warm rainfall... a few drops of wisdom and insight to transform the ordinary into the extraordinary...


............................

mark the words
I give to thee

guard your flank
prepare to flee -

though thirst is great
one cannot think

a splash, a sip -
a choking drink

and then away
lest one be drowned

left drifting -
making not a sound

fear not the beasts
who lie in wait...

the pool reflects
a darker fate

a poison pen may hinder thee
but minds die of banality



- for Sunnie and Ray
I miss you today... (everyday)

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Comments:
misschoos

Dec 20 @ 2:12PM  
Kudos gf
HighlandsLass

Dec 20 @ 2:22PM  
Beautiful!
travelwoman

Dec 20 @ 2:23PM  

Beautiful poem!

Thank you for sharing
beckyiv42000

Dec 20 @ 2:33PM  
beautiful
EternalFlame

Dec 20 @ 2:49PM  
stephendedalus

Dec 20 @ 3:22PM  
Wonderful!
Missy_21484

Dec 20 @ 3:29PM  
SallyF

Dec 20 @ 5:41PM  
Wow, P~.......simply WOW!
sciurusniger

Dec 20 @ 6:47PM  
"...but minds die of banality"





~*~
unionman154

Dec 20 @ 8:14PM  
Cool poem.
sloriver

Dec 31 @ 1:45PM  
How I try to avoid that tar pool. Thanks for the thought you provoked. Nice poem, gf.
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