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There’ll always be a storm outside.

posted 5/22/2008 7:32:12 PM |
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  misschoos

There’ll always be a storm outside.

You’ve been standing on the same fields all your life,
Sowing seeds that never grow.
And you hear the cry of angels in the night,
But your light will never glow.
You watch the petals fall, roots never entwined,
Casting shadows as you go.
When the curtain cloaks your sunrise you won’t know.

There’s no glisten in dull waters,
No answer in dark skies,
And for you there’ll always be a storm outside.

misschoos© 2008


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Comments:
Tunes4u

May 22 @ 7:42PM  
Nice!

I didn't see the part about listening with you eyes though?

Did that mean it got axed?

Oh well...I like it....


~*~

Thomas
TroutFishing

May 22 @ 7:42PM  
very nice - but I believe people can and do change -
and more often than we admit.

I know that is irrelevant but I like the meter of what you wrote.
Sounds like the start of a nice song.


LoveME10der2005

May 22 @ 8:30PM  
I love your poetry...

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oceanlover734

May 22 @ 9:19PM  
Sad poem..........or the way I read it. I take it has about people who never get anywhere in their life. Sadly it is a fact of life thus I say wonderful writing! ~*~
redtigr

May 22 @ 10:15PM  
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1cebit2iceshy

May 22 @ 10:23PM  
As always, really, really good..

kattsmeow

May 22 @ 10:24PM  
~*~
SunBabe

May 23 @ 1:52AM  
And for you there’ll always be a storm outside.

Oh! Perfect!
I'd have liked to have shared this poem and plastered that line on my NY friend's dashboard. ~sigh~

(I got tired of watering the seeds he sowed...he let them die when I wasn't around )

Thank you once again, MissC~ for sharing what you see through many sets of eyes ~*~
georgew

May 23 @ 10:06AM  
Such a lovely poem dear.
sciurusniger

May 23 @ 6:27PM  
Very well done.


~*~
Santo007

May 26 @ 11:15AM  
mystery2u888

Jun 2 @ 9:40AM  
Very nicely done............indeed................you know I love them all though I am never dissappointed with your blogs, your stories, your books, songs and everything else inbetween.................I just love that you come to life when youu write.............

It's originial and creative and that is what I love to read....fresh and exciting new things...........it is never repeated............




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