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posted 7/1/2008 8:00:17 AM |
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  Blueschic

He had the look.
The look that grabbed her attention,
Stirred her senses,
Awakened her need for an experienced lover.

She sensed that he was capable...more than capable,
Confident in his abilities.
Aware.......
Of the image that he projected,
The obvious attention directed toward him,
The deliberate desire.

She closed her eyes and savored his words,
Recounted, as they became etched in her mind.
As though they were carefully painted with watercolors on the clouds.
Beauty that could be seen but remained beyond reach.

She felt it,
Unable to deny that it existed.
A connection, a hunger, a need to discard all reason.
To touch, to need.
Unabashedly unashamed to take it all,
All that was offered...and more.
More...so much more...if he only knew.

Fantasies fulfilled and unfulfilled,
She would take from him.
As fresh as the morning dew,
As pure as a mountain stream,
As fragrant as Nite Jasmine,
As erotic as the smell of love.

As their lips met she knew that her expectations would be fulfilled.

To be continued........

Just started writing this poem this morning. Not sure which way I want to take it.
I may not be able to post the rest...LOL

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Comments:
Blueschic

Jul 1 @ 9:19AM  
Sorry. I had the comment setting turned off.
honeybear285

Jul 1 @ 9:22AM  


More!

Loves ya Sista
Honeybear
fenderchick

Jul 1 @ 9:46AM  
She closed her eyes and savored his words,
Recounted, as they became etched in her mind.
As though they were carefully painted with watercolors on the clouds.
Beauty that could be seen but remained beyond reach.

I really like this part
KnittinKitten

Jul 1 @ 9:48AM  
Blues:

I'm willing to bet that, many of us have also experienced it... who knows, maybe it's better off to be kept in our hearts than to see it emblazoned on screen, to remind us of something we'd rather keep as a memory.

Sometime all that feeling and desire ends in hurt.....Then, of course, you're certainly welcome to give it a "happy ending" Fantasies can go that way, ya know...

You write it, I'll read it.....and send a kudo, too.

KK
Blueschic

Jul 1 @ 9:58AM  
KK....I could give it alternate endings.
newpatches

Jul 1 @ 11:48AM  
Oh Blues....tell me MORE!!! It's been so long since love and romance that I've forgotten how it can stir the heart...body...the soul................sigh......
waterfire

Jul 1 @ 10:04PM  
wow
ANGRY_MUPPET

Jul 2 @ 8:16PM  


very nice

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