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Early Morning Train

posted 9/21/2008 12:50:35 PM |
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  misschief

This is something I wrote a few weeks ago, it's on youtube, the music compliments it, or at least I think it does.

>>> Early Morning Train <<<


I sat down in the carriage on the early morning train,
The weight upon my mind today more than the heavy rain,
I watch the station fade into the distance with no trace,
The window with no landscapes…it’s a mirror of your face.

As I remember Paris, I can never forget you,
Those sweet romantic moments, spent alone, with just us two.
I remember your last words to me, they’re etched upon my heart,
I know that this is meant to be, I’d known it from the start.

My mind’s made up, I’m on my way, I start to read my book,
But as I turn the pages, and I take a closer look,
I see my world in print and pictures, like a magazine,
And throughout all these chapters, my whole life story can be seen.

Winter’s here already but the ending’s not the same,
As I had planned it all, it seems to be insane,
You aren’t here as I’d imagined, you’re there with someone else,
She’s holding the baby and I cannot see myself.

I close the book in haste, and I can’t turn the final page,
To see my life in play with only me on centre stage.
It’s been a rollercoaster ride, I know I’ve lost my friend,
I see the landscape through the window, my journey at an end.

misschoos ©


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Comments:
ceecee1952

Sep 21 @ 12:57PM  
yes the music does complement the mood.... how sad but how at the same time calmly beautiful. ty for sharing
cc
oceanlover734

Sep 21 @ 1:09PM  
Ahhh the music with the way the words flow across the screen took me there. ~*~
kywonder

Sep 21 @ 2:17PM  
Beautiful as ever misschief!!
PrettyGreenEyes578

Sep 21 @ 2:41PM  
One of your very best, My Friend.

leprichaun_magic

Sep 21 @ 5:46PM  
you did capture the mood ..well
Borty

Sep 21 @ 6:32PM  
I could see that as a black and white movie....like one of those grey sunday's where everyone you see is in love except me...and wondering why...pinning over lost loves....but then suddenly the dancing bananna shows up ...and all is well.
TroutFishing

Sep 21 @ 7:48PM  
How nice it is that when people choose to leave us behind, we are better off,
whether we realize or admit it or not.

Some people just use others and when we are free of them it becomes
clearer over time.

True caring never ends, whether they are present or not. They do not need
to be present if we truly care in return.

Real love is forever. Whether it is reciprocal or not.


hoftner

Sep 21 @ 10:39PM  
I've missed you choo choo!,oh excuse me. I should say now; miss miss
Glad to see you're still around
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