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Tunes4u: One of the things I try to do to make my stories read better, is to proofread to make sure I didn't anything out. I work hard at this. I think it's important. If you reread your work, you will find on rereading your work that a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing the work you are rereading for repetition
I did have to chuckle at this......... 
There's nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein. ~Walter Wellesley "Red" Smith
I like this. I think your 'emotions' vein is working just fine.
If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden. ~Claudia Ghandi
This is beautiful....................and yes, you could have.
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