| Feb 8, 2007 @ 5:22 PM |
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raykl
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We men know how hard it is to buy presents for Valentine's Day. How about something that does not cost anything and women love them and think you are so sweet for writing one for them. That's right the good ole "LOVE POEM".
Just write something about the both of you and what you have shared. Here are some examples to help you out:
Something you did together:
Perhaps it was the snow outside,
Perhaps the streetlight's flicker;
Perhaps it was the cozy hush,
Or the 40 of malt liquor;
But when I took you in my arms
For love extraordinary,
I didn't care who saw or heard.
We lit up that library!
Maybe something funny that happened to the both of you:
Skinny dip! Skinny dip!
Take off skirt and bra and slip!
Who's that coming? Where's your top?
See you later! It's a cop!
A poem to show her you are sorry for something you did:
My friend Tammy, she's so nice,
She has us over for chicken and rice.
She throws parties with punch and stew,
But I don't love her, 'cause she's not you.
My friend Wanda, she's so fun,
She's all dancing and drinks and sun.
She has boyfriends, a lot, it's true,
But I'm not one, 'cause she's not you.
Then there's Anna, she's so hot,
Pretty and sweet and modest (not!).
I'd have tried harder to resist her
If I'd known that she was your sister.
Not creative: Use the old standard poem:
Roses are red, violets are blue,
After my buddies, my favorite is you!
They're best for darts, pool and drinking all day,
But I come to you for a roll in the hay.
Try to compare her to things you value:
Our eyes meet,
like old friends in the supermarket who haven't seen each other since Pearl Harbor Day,
mine drinking in the brownness of yours,
drinking it in like coffee without cream,
like cocoa without marshmallows,
like steak sauce, and my heart
is a pinball in my chest cavity,
lighting up my ribs and lungs and liver,
until I glow inside like a bug zapper on a summer night.
I hope this has been of help to all you guys on this dreaded day!!
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 5:24 PM |
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kattsmeow
Posts: 21,282
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 I have a bunch of poems Haban has wrote to me. It is a wonderful idea.
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 5:53 PM |
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loisday
Posts: 1,333
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Those are the greatest!!!!! 
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 6:07 PM |
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Loreli
Posts: 20,319
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Poems are a great idea!
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 6:08 PM |
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wandaful123
Posts: 1,511
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Awww Ray... as always, the great romantic (note sarcasm please)  Didn't know you had it in you (poetry that is) There is hope!!!
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 10:07 PM |
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LipGlossQueen9
Posts: 10,088
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Ideally, nothing.
But if you must, the Ric Flair dvd would be awesome.
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 11:08 PM |
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mzlara388
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I'd like sarcasm for Valentine's Day as long as it comes with some cuddling.
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| Feb 8, 2007 @ 11:15 PM |
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signme
Posts: 9,590
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I can write my own poems. I want something more, more, more!!! LOL
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