| Jul 19, 2007 @ 9:51 PM |
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whatatown
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her beauty made him forget everything...
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 9:51 PM |
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dt3d2001
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should he, or should he not
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 9:52 PM |
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American_Woman
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that she could forget the past
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 9:58 PM |
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lilofval
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So quickly with no lost feelings.
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 9:59 PM |
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whatatown
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i posted a poem on the blog thing.hope you guys like it
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 9:59 PM |
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whatatown
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now im exposed for all eyes...
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:01 PM |
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dt3d2001
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there goes the tough guy thing WT 
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:02 PM |
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whatatown
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hey man....i would be playing football if it werent for having fallen off a building and tearing my knee up!.....im pretty tough! (its tough, but sensitive....gotta be balanced bro! lol)
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:04 PM |
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American_Woman
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very good Nick. BTW, women love poetry. Tough guy image can only take you so far 
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:05 PM |
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whatatown
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thanks, but i really dont write for women, although its often about them.
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:05 PM |
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lilofval
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Couldn't agree more AW. Great poem Nick ....... 
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:15 PM |
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whatatown
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his head hangs low with appreciation...
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:15 PM |
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lilofval
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As he gazes at her beauty.
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:17 PM |
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dt3d2001
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all over,, and over,, and over
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:18 PM |
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whatatown
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he finds peace he has never known.....
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:18 PM |
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American_Woman
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she was out of his reach
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:20 PM |
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whatatown
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so he raised upon his toes...
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:20 PM |
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whatatown
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and fell flat on his head
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:26 PM |
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dt3d2001
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as us fellers do quite often
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| Jul 19, 2007 @ 10:30 PM |
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theresam77
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lol dt ohhhh dt
she wanted more, but did she?
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