| Dec 23, 2005 @ 6:29 AM |
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ExacerbatedTaboo

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Thoughts of death course through my mind
A painful past so hard to leave behind
The pills and alcohol provide no relief
They only seem to intensify the sorrow and grief.
I close my eyes and let the hurt consume me
The frustration and bitterness cuts right through me.
Too many downfalls no good can be found
The life in me is drained and weeping is the sound
coming from the room and down the lonely halls
the coldness of a life regretted surrounded by these walls
The clouds of sadness that I have seen will soon no longer be
When I put the blade to my wrist and set myself free
I close my eyes and the blood runs out I'm feeling more at ease
My problems are over and now it's done at last I am at peace.
[Edited on 12/23/2005 6:33 AM]
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| Dec 23, 2005 @ 6:40 AM |
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RAKS37

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reach for the lotion not the razor
damn
hope you're not really feeling that bad
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| Dec 23, 2005 @ 6:56 AM |
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ExacerbatedTaboo

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LOL...Nah...I'm fine..I think I've been listening to too much Staind these days....
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| Dec 23, 2005 @ 8:28 PM |
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SirMarkiss

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lol I think you are feeling bad for writing so many cliches....ugh
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| Dec 24, 2005 @ 2:56 AM |
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RAKS37

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Hey your number one fan is back
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| Dec 24, 2005 @ 3:57 AM |
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ExacerbatedTaboo

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You changed your pic...It's alot better.
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| Dec 24, 2005 @ 11:11 AM |
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Classy_Blonde

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Wow Tabbykins,
You freaked me out. I thought you wrote that today, after I had done your quiz evaluation for you. I see it was yesterday.
This is weird. Did you go back and read what I wrote?
I've never been here before. Angel asked me to check out her poetry, and I saw yours.
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| Jan 1, 2006 @ 5:18 PM |
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PoolAnyone

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Here is one I wrote years ago.
Frozen
Frozen with fear,
unable to move.
I need to react,
I need to do.
Yet I am trapped,
because of fear.
How can I live,
unable to move.
Life gives me things,
I need to do.
Yet I fail,
because of fear.
Frozen with fear,
unable to move.
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| Jan 8, 2006 @ 10:13 AM |
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Lee_Danger

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Appropriate Title
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