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| Jun 19 @ 4:16 PM |
The Day You Died
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AngelLight
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The Day You Died
Suicide
The day you died
I know you tried
I know you cried
No where to hide
Couldn’t stand the lies
My, oh my
The day you died…..
I cried too, yes, over you
Over you!
But I understood the pain
You were never the same
Couldn’t play the game
It all felt insane
Nothing to console or tame
the anguish inside
Such a lonely ride
when you’re served cold
hearted pride
The tears in your eyes
No fear of goodbye
No words could deny two
worlds that collide
You went away
It’s okay but, it’s not okay
A very sad day
Nothing more to say
Rain showered flowers
upon Love’s crimson grave
~© JDS 06/19/2009~
[Edited on 6/19/2009 6:42 PM]
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| Jun 19 @ 5:38 PM |
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plowman
Posts: 1,283
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Its not ok...
I miss you everyday,
in every way
if only I'd have known
you felt so alone
and couldn't tell
or shout,
or yell
until you fell
and on that day
I died too
crying,
tears of a clown
when no one is around...
forevermore.
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| Jun 19 @ 6:35 PM |
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AngelLight
Posts: 5,620
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Ty for your add on plowman....
and I'm sorry for your loss.
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| Jun 19 @ 7:18 PM |
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Northman1955
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It is ok
It is not about me
It is how you feel
Not unhappy just is not enough
Not too old to dream
Not wating to live in fear
Will you catch a break
Will a good man come
Will that God help you
I am just a friend
I know you feel alone
I do not know what to do
So many people love you
So many would cry
So do not leave us
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| Jun 19 @ 7:19 PM |
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plowman
Posts: 1,283
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ty for your sentiments, AL
your words touched me in good way
they say it gets better, but I don't know
and somedays it even gets worse
a nce woman once told me the he misses me too
that helped
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| Jun 19 @ 10:00 PM |
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AngelLight
Posts: 5,620
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That's a beautiful write Northman....ty for posting it.
(((((plowman))))) I'm glad the write touched you in a good way.
Peaceful evening ~
A rose for you....@)
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| Jun 20 @ 2:16 AM |
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plowman
Posts: 1,283
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yeah north, pretty nice, hey
sometimes its ok
for them to leave that way
its their own life
given with free will
so we do as we please
and try not to hurt anyone
sometimes though
some of us will run though
and even doing that
takes a wee bit of courage...
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| Jun 20 @ 2:38 AM |
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mystery2u888
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All Beautiful.
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| Jun 22 @ 10:26 AM |
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AngelLight
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Thanks mysti
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| Jun 24 @ 3:54 PM |
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mystery2u888
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 AngelLight.............all of your poems are wonderful
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