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press_ie
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-Uncovered Hearts-
Glimpses of movement in the glimmering light,
Branches waving, giving flickering sight,
Snapshots of a smile shining bright,
Hair glistening in the mid - autumn breeze,
Laughter bursting out with the audible tease,
Trapping the giggles, ending up in a heap,
Those Mystical oval eyes ever so bold,
Enticing - fascination breaking my hold,
Plunging into the pitch black of the unknown,
Searching the depths of her immortal soul,
Sharing each others most secret prose,
Stripped of all the meaningless clothes,
Exposing, unafraid, those deepest hidden parts,
Fully giving, trusting with the uncovered hearts,
Joining together to make that forever march,
Not just pie in the sky, but a real time fresh start.
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| Feb 2, 2006 @ 8:45 PM |
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JadeIris7
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Great Poem...very romantic and touching
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| Feb 2, 2006 @ 10:19 PM |
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press_ie
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Thank you!
Your remarks were more than kind.
Omnia vincit amor
Terry
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| Feb 4, 2006 @ 7:03 AM |
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JadeIris7
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Omnia vincit amor.....can you please tell me the meaning of this...I am very inquisitive and interested in other languages....I was thinking that amor means a feeling of appreciation or loving? hmmm just interested is all.......
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| Feb 4, 2006 @ 9:27 AM |
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press_ie
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Hi,
Yes, it's one of my favorite Latin quotes and it says,
"Love conquers all."
Terry
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| Feb 4, 2006 @ 9:01 PM |
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JadeIris7
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Thank you very much for sharing what that quote meant.....another to add to my book of quotes and poetry I love......here is one of my poems....
The Soft Cry of Your Heart (1/9/05)
Do not close your ears to the
Soft Cry of your Heart...
The mind seems to shout, in fear~
"Watch out~Guard your heart!"
Do not listen then with your mind or ears
Simply listen to....
And rely upon
The Soft Cry of Your Heart.
HJL
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| Feb 4, 2006 @ 10:34 PM |
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MD1983
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nice poem press 
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| Feb 4, 2006 @ 10:55 PM |
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press_ie
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JadeIris7,
Very nice poem!
Thank you for sharing.
That soft cry does get to the quick.
And thank you MD1983 for the encouragement!
Speaking of Love, below is another one my poems with comments:
1Corinthians 13 states that all human knowledge is imperfect, and transient.
But Faith, Hope, and Love are Eternal. And the greatest of these is love.
~ Love ~
Love is always patient and kind,
When faced with our faults it is blind.
Love is never in a jealous bind,
Nor does it take on a boasting mind.
Love does not insist on its own way,
It will not lead astray.
Love can never betray,
And love will not accept pay.
Love is not arrogant or rude,
It cannot whine and brood,
Neither will love cause a feud,
And finds it impossible to exclude.
Love is saddened by the wrong of things,
But rejoices when goodness springs.
Love takes us under her wings,
And carries us away as she sings.
Through all things love will bear,
Refusing to lose hope and despair.
Love will forever declare
Things that are not as though they are there.
Love shall cling to believe,
And it will not deceive,
Carrying its load daily with each heave,
Promising for all eternity never to leave.
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| Feb 4, 2006 @ 11:04 PM |
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MD1983
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I couldn't have said it better myself Jade and press keep up the good work.
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| Feb 5, 2006 @ 1:54 PM |
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JadeIris7
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Press_ie...very nice poem....I have several others but I need to find my poetry journal so I can share them with You and everyone else....I find that poetry is a great way to express what I feel and sometimes just to vent....I also express myself through art and sketching.
Jade
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| Feb 10, 2006 @ 4:43 AM |
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rosewallacegoldeline
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in general, i found it a bit trite, with the exception of this line: "stripped of all the meaningless clothes," which i absolutely loved.
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| Feb 10, 2006 @ 9:44 AM |
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press_ie
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Okay Jersey girl - point well taken.
Glad you liked something in the poem. 
Try this one:
~ Imagination Thieves ~
The yellow orb hangs
In a forever frame
Robbing the surreal
Of its daily evening meal
Beams of light reflect
The brilliant rays
That reach out to heal
And hear nature praise
Ghost and goblins
Lurk in the tree tops
Perched to spring
When the twilight is king
The shadowy figurines
From ominous dreams
Silently leap and tease
Childhood fears with ease
The crunching sound
Of stepped on leaves
Can be heard
In the vision that believes
The story is stolen
By imagination thieves
And is freshly sold
Each time the eye perceives
The canvass stain
Shall always remain
But the very next gaze
Starts a brand new phase
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| Aug 22, 2006 @ 11:56 AM |
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press_ie
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Hi all,
I recently revised "Uncovered Hearts."
Hope you enjoy!
Terry
~ Uncovered Hearts ~
Glimpses of movement in the glimmering light,
Countless branches waving bring flickering sight
From the globe in the sky that is blinking bright,
Causing snapshots of smiles to shine in the night.
Silky hair glistens in the mid - autumn breeze,
Her laughter bursts out with an audible tease,
Trapping the giggles as they end in a heap.
Excited endorphins awake from their sleep,
And the two inch closer to taking the leap
When desire lures them to the edge of the deep.
Hypnotic consuming eyes absorb the bold,
Enticing - fascination breaking each hold,
Plunging into the pitch black of the unknown,
Grasping - transparency in their lonely souls,
Sharing one another's most secret prose,
Stripped of all the meaningless clothes;
Exposing, unafraid, those deepest hidden parts,
Fully giving, trusting with the uncovered hearts,
Joining together to make that forever march;
Not just pie in the sky, but a real time fresh start.
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| Apr 18, 2007 @ 6:19 PM |
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lui2you
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What a beautiful poem press. I think romantic writing, is such a lost art.
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| Apr 19, 2007 @ 6:54 PM |
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lui2you
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I thought you guys might like this. This is old man is so cute with his love letters. He has been collecting them since the 40's and 50's, back when it writing a love letter wasn't just sending an email.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MXcU1BS4Bmk
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| May 2, 2007 @ 9:08 AM |
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press_ie
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lui2you,
I am glad that you enjoyed the poem!
I hope that you and Baxter are well.
TP
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| Jun 4, 2007 @ 2:15 AM |
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drphilmccrackin
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there once was
a Man form
Nantucket.
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| May 27 @ 4:14 AM |
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mystery2u888
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 Very nice poem Press
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