| Nov 14, 2005 @ 1:51 PM |
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carriageman

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andthere wasa a dolfin in the sky
it drifted into nothingness
like friends
after happy days gone by
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| Nov 14, 2005 @ 6:13 PM |
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Angel54214

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Hi CarriageMan, I love your poem, I could just see the Dolphins drifting by in the sky as I read it. Its awsome! Angel
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| Nov 14, 2005 @ 6:19 PM |
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Angel54214

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The Praying Mantis
Oh gentle Mantis say a prayer for me
Upon your moss under the hemlock tree
How quiet you are such a gent indeed
Your coat so blends with the milk pod weed
Is your resting place under the forge-me-nots
To shade your wings from the sun so hot?
My precious Mantis how deeply you pray
Please say one for all on this beautiful day!
Angel
Echoes In My World
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| Nov 14, 2005 @ 8:59 PM |
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StarDust62

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very nice angel.........hope he says a prayer for all as well
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| Nov 14, 2005 @ 9:35 PM |
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Angel54214

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For sure StarDust Preying Mantis are cute little buggers aren't they?
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| Nov 15, 2005 @ 12:54 AM |
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poettothecars

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praying Mantis may be cute little buggers
but hemlock is highly poisonous
such are the merits of life
once bitten some times shy
and in my real life I have spent 10 years
just trying to eliminate a batch of hemlock
and that is true in every way
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| Nov 15, 2005 @ 2:21 PM |
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SirMarkiss

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just how exactly does a dolphin fly?
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| Nov 15, 2005 @ 9:42 PM |
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Angel54214

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Hey Markiss..think of it this way before you get a large absess on your head by hitting it...
dolphins in the sky...question; what do you see when you look in the sky? (daytime) Hint, hint: not cotton candy, ah not cotton balls. Little trivia here
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| Nov 16, 2005 @ 7:16 AM |
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carriageman

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thanks angel ........ liked yours too .... praying mantis of any size are usually females .... and if the male is not careful in mating he can be a meal as well ofthe female ....... the original reason for the saying coming and going at same time .. lol
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| Nov 16, 2005 @ 7:13 PM |
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StarDust62

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as for hemlock, was at a nature centre this summer, and they were telling us of the many healing tendencies the hemlock has...........just a little knowledge i picked up this year
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| Nov 16, 2005 @ 8:05 PM |
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poettothecars

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all I know about hemlock is that is can cause blindness
and is highly toxic - and had death associated with it
so I am at a loss to any healing properties such a plant of death could hold -
maybe I need to do more research
[Edited on 11/16/2005 8:04 PM]
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| Nov 17, 2005 @ 12:19 AM |
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Angel54214

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Ok, here's a new one I wrote. All critics can clap if you like...
A FINAL REGRET
As she lays upon
Her deathbed
All is in order
But she wipes
Tears from her
Eyes as she
Remembered
She forgot to
Hug her dog.
Angel
Echoes In My World
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| Nov 17, 2005 @ 9:40 AM |
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skinnybarncat

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Like the poem!...
.....dolphins do fly...
....hemlock is toxic..
......so is water...
.......and penicillin...
......perspective.....
......hug a dog, kiss a frog....
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| Nov 17, 2005 @ 9:23 PM |
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Angel54214

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Hey Skinny, you gonna wet yourself you keep laughing so hard...Your funny!
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| Nov 17, 2005 @ 9:28 PM |
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Angel54214

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This poem I wrote and is in a chapter of the book I am writing called "Childrens Treasure Corner" Hope you enjoy!
SIR DRAGONFLY
Good day sir dragonfly, how do you do!
Did you come from a sandy beach
To make a point of view?
You are so positively stunning
With your pastel sparkled wings
Lifting you to n fro to rest upon my knee.
Sting me not sir dragonfly
Do you think I hold you to account
Any despair in all that you have found?
Angel
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| Nov 18, 2005 @ 12:00 PM |
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skinnybarncat

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Angel, thank you for your appreciation...
don't get much of that.
Yes, the day begins well when i wake up in a dry bed.
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