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Jun 17, 2006 @ 11:26 AM Sharp Words    
luvshorses644


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Sharp little words that cut, they hurt
Can you feel my pain?
Tell me why it so easy to treat me like dirt
Over and over again?

I would rather a small quick slap,
It would hurt and then fade away,
But all I ever get is this cutting crap.
And words given in anger seem to stay.
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Jun 17, 2006 @ 1:24 PM Sharp Words    
one_dimple


Posts: 188
Was this written from personal memories/experiences? Many can relate
to this poem, I know I do.

Thanks for sharing it....it's pretty good
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Jun 17, 2006 @ 2:41 PM Sharp Words    
Elaine06


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I like this poem. Sharp words, hurtful words can hurt more than a slap they follow us even in our shadows we cannot escape them.
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Jun 18, 2006 @ 5:42 PM Sharp Words    
luvshorses644


Posts: 1,571
OneDimple (Jules)...yes, it was from memories and experiences... sometimes as Elaine said they follow us around the rest of our lives.

Elaine, I could not agree with you more..

Thanks to you both for the kind words.
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Jun 22, 2006 @ 2:27 PM Sharp Words    
funguy007


Posts: 144
Very good, get it out.

Funguy
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